I found the charcters hard to connect with, and understand. I found Jackson rifling through Jet's medicine cabinet was a huge invasion of privacy, and to then just fall into bed after seemed a bit forced. I like the hints of Jet and Ingo's history to be the most interesting aspect of the story. Thedog talking didn't work for me in the context of the story. The writing style is interesting, and with some work this could be a great story.