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Currently reading

Billionaire's Row
Sullivan Wheeler
The Summer I Became a Nerd
Leah Rae Miller
Tattoos & Teacups
Anna Martin
London Falling
Paul Cornell
The Gravedigger's Brawl
Abigail Roux
The Case of the Rising Star: A Derrick Steele Mystery
Zavo
Hunted
Luke Daniels, Kevin Hearne
Sinner's Gin
Rhys Ford
Going Down for the Count
Cage Thunder
Greg Honey
Russ Gregory
Per Ardua Ad Astra - Gil Cole Odd word choices, repeated words and awkward turns of phrase made this story very hard for me to read. The characters felt flat and underdeveloped. Their interactions felt stiff, and stilted, and I never felt any real connection or chemistry between them at all, and the sex scenes felt a bit forced and weird. Nothing about this really worked for me at all.